bonu - structure is good, flow is ok, rhyme scheme is wack, most of the punches suck, no personals, no multis, basic wordplay
atl - structure is good, flow is pretty good, rhyme scheme is ok, some of the punches r pretty good, personals r ok, ok multis, pretty good wordplay
conclusion - atl takes this in rhyme scheme, punches, personals, and wordplay, so he gets my vote
VOTE - ATL SHAWTY
yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u did the same.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105947
much appreciated.........