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Old 01-19-04, 01:19 PM   #22
Telekinetic
Poetic Justice
 
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Under- Ive seen better from you before I dont know what happend here. Your verse was filled with multis but no real clever punches were in there. It flowed pretty well, but it was like the punches you did throw in were not really aimed directly at him. It needed better personals too.

AJ- Your verse had some pretty clever punches in it with some nice personals too. It also seemed to flow pretty well. You stayed stong threw out the whole verse too an ended with a nice personal. Pretty good verse

OVERALL- AJ his personals an punches were more creative an were aimed on the spot.
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