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Old 01-19-04, 02:20 PM   #8
Bio*Chemist
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Ok check it...
Ok your first paragraph was like wow..a Lot of vocabulary to express yourself..
To many ION endings though…good so far..and unique..

“Deeply into cultural preservation like I'm a preservative
Conservative, ensuring all you cyber flowers have heard of it”
Well done opener…well put you made me as the reader understand..
Deep for a liner..

“I'm so prolific my cursors cursin it, so ill that doctors nursin it
So nice with acronyms, I get gassed like flatulence
Then patent it, so sick they padded my walls with mattresses”

A little miss spellings however nice metaphor and you kept flow..

“Flattery gets you everywhere, just visualize and mentally compute it
The most relative aspects and characteristics are 'beautiful' and 'stupid'
Globally disputed standards but none apply when I vocalize
The masses are unable to read your posts like faces exhibiting poker eyes”

Very ill with the illustration nice fam..nice scheme and flow..

Ok your whole piece was well done..interesting piece threw out..I have other qoutes but this board is acting slow I guess due to the reconstruction..very unique piece and all lines were well worded..

I don't know why heads sleep on pieces lihis...but yeah..great scripts..

peace..
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