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Drop Of Genius
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IP:
Erm....dunno where to start
Feeble-
Your verse was Ok....nothin special tho.
Your opener was Ok to make it more effective you coulda worded it better.
Your best line was:
a bashed gay, harmless faggot kid - im convinced he is ..
so if you post up something dope, it must be coincidence
Your flow was good but like everythin else....could of been improved.
And your punches didnt hit very hard....except the one I highlighted
Overall I'd give it a 5/10
Rythmic~Hints-
Your punches also didnt hit very hard but you added the odd personal in there.
Fix your structure tho
Your best line was:
Fuckin bitch, touchin mes a no-no/
You aint even aight, you so-so, couldnt "see me" if I sent you a photo/
Your flow was Ok....but simalar to Feeble really, could and should do better.
Overall I'd give you a 5.5/10......The personals got it eventhough they were weak
v/ Rythmic.......both elevate tho
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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002
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