yo nice shit bro, basic, deep and simple, flow was tight but proply coulda used a lil more vocab but your wordplay and multi's made up for that and I really like the closing line really finished the piece off nicely. only thing I do really wish for though was this to maybe be longer and maybe a hook added but dope shit bro keep droppin.

peep my collab with Yaz called "Stories of Old" and leave some feedback, muchly appreciated and thanx in advance. peace.

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