yo man a shit load of nice fuckin lines in this piece, very sickly ill use of vocab and wordplay although your first verse I thought had to many big words in it took away from the flow but as for the rest of it it was down. flow, multi's, wordplay, structure, and your rhyme scheme was really good lots of complexity. keep up bro peace.

peep my collab with yaz called "Stories of Old" and leave some feedback plz it's gettin slept on bad, thanx in advance.

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