you have a very open imangeray, and show it well throu this piece. very detailed and seems to be carefuly written, focusing not so much on the over all structure but on each line, and its impact. your message may not come across loud and clear, but its a deep thinking poem, thats not all that simple. your outro to this piece i thought was well written too, i liked the imangeray there.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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