yo man some really good wordplay in this, I found the flow was a bit hard to follow in a couple spots though but u had some good vocab and multi's which made up for it, your sturcture was kinda mixed up a little it seems but that might differ from reader but to me it looks like it could use a little work but keep up bro. peace.

if u got time peep my collab with Yaz called "Stories of Old" and leave some feedback. muchly appreciated thanx in advance. peace.

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