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Old 01-19-04, 04:03 PM   #14
Lethargic
Middle Weight
 
Posts: 828
From: Campbellsville
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Bribe's Verse

your the current champ?.who's this kid imitiating
U dont size up to a drizzle when you're supposed to B reigning

Eh, okay.

remain thru it all ..the single hand that feeds him
who says my son is spoiled just look at the times I've beat him

Lol, old concept, but very nicely worded to give it a fresh spin.

defeat him again?..-
.I'll meet him first when he steps in the door
drive his head through it and put a new look on board

heh, again old concept, but with a fresh spin put on it. Not as nice as the son/beat him though.

we know your running for supermod ...and slowly cprogress
but I'll let u beat me ...if your campaigning for status

Yuck mouth

they named me the baddest, to kill without trying
I saw your narcissim when i heard u riding on I aM.

M'kay

on the real why push?. when by yourself u will plumet
have u seeing stars without Bush and his budget

lmao, nice

watch dude bake, cause in target practice I shoot fake
christmas passed now.... so I lay rest to this fruit cake.

Nope, there was no fresh spin this time

I bag the lame.. and u can ask any bitches that know me
I also can dull,
...... so from now on make wishes and blow me....! ! ! !.

Didn't help your verse

Feeb's Verse

when i think of the legends, your image is lingering slow ...
cuz if this shit is wack, u taught me everything that i know

Lol, nice

Bribe we're searching for dopeness, & your verse is inertial ..
cuz if that's the stuff.. then you're in a hostess commercial

Lol, tryin way too hard here

Largo its time to clean up your mess, i even threw in the rag
only time he's outta my league, is when i boot him from tag'd

Much better

M~M says im elevatin quick, no way i'll reckognize you
cuz I'll quit rapbattles.com just before the second i do ..

Naught Feel-N Thaat

your only delayin my options, and your just a hooligan g
he's makin rapbattles more horrible, than vbulletin three ..

Yeah, no shit...hate the new board. Not a bad punch, but poorly worded

u can pave the road to success, for combatin ya doubts
but then i'll come along, and I'll fucking flatten it out ..

Me likes

that will amount, to me revealing ur wackness, slews
cuz like ur sig says: Expression With Words: Eww ..

BLeh, Nahhh

OVERALL: Very close battle. Both had some really good punches...and both had some bleh punches. I'm gonna have to say Feeb's edges it. Bribe, you might have taken it if it weren't for all the played concepts. You had a fair overabundance of them. ANyway, not a bad battle guys. Enjoyed reading for the most part.

Vote ~ Feebs