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Old 01-19-04, 04:40 PM   #4
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In this battle your going 2 be more than disapointing as i have BIG HOPES/
Your lyrics show ur clearly a newbie and lack sense show imma show u the ropes/
In battles your supposed 2 spit punches,personals and meta's/
Your verse lacked all,visit w.e.c as your shit is like mail letta's/
You will probably spit the minimum of 10 lines as your head sounds hollow/
Check my verse take it all in,dont spit it out as ive heard you like 2 swallow/
Thinkin that you could beat me in this battle,Imma resurrect your talent/
The biggest mistake that you made was accepting this challenge/
Big Opes you gotta admit that ya scheme is boring,im abusin ya chest/
Brusin ya flesh,your a fuckin faggot and your losin in text/
Don't even write back,you just a she, & geek hater, iight kid/
Your the type to look at my verse then, weeks later bite it/
The main Fact is, you need a few years of practice/
To match this^^^you'd need to spare me all your wackness/

uppin this shit 4 votes....ive got writers block but managed 2 squeeze this out
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