I'm new to this website and have been flowing for years (more fingers than you have on both hands)but any WAY I CAN TEACH YOU THE ART OF FLOW.lISTEN TO PEOPLE WHO SUCK MORE THAN YOU WON'T HELP. PULL OUT YOUR PEN AND PAD BITCH SCHOOLS IN SESSION. 1. a good song does'nt always have fancy punch lines.
2.work on metaphores
3.look for your opponents faults in his raps and use that shit more than you do thats what it's there for.I'll give you a 8 your almost there