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Middle Weight
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IP:
prophacyz...truthfully, your structure was messed. I could barely read it, remember this isn't audio, you need to make your structure so its an easy read...and because of this bad structure, it really destroyed the enjoyment of your verse. 2nd, Brethren had better personals, and that also created better punchlines. I was'nt feeling the whole nas-god brethren thingy espically...and your punches weren't fresh...
This was an ok battle overall, nothing that was above the ordinary.
My vote goes to brethren.
Both of you need to get better though.
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