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IP:
wow deep shit man
nice stuff actually
nice imagery
good concept about freedom
I Was Blessed With A Voice,But Felt No Reason To Speak
For Freedom Is Speach,Then I Feal No Need To Be Free
^^by far the best in your free verse
nice blankverse too
stanzaa and structure was decent
8.6/10
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