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Old 01-19-04, 06:22 PM   #27
Cata_Strophix
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Yo----had decent flow--good use of vocab and wordplay--had some nice personals and punches but nothin outstandin---but overall i would rate it a 5-10


Yte----u def need ALOT of help with your structure--flow--vocab and pretty much evrything else---you didn't have a bad verse--but it lacked alot--in the punches personals and flow cats..


Vote ---YO