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Old 01-19-04, 06:33 PM   #12
Zarbon
Flyweight
 
Posts: 135
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feeble

he's thick as a forest. . and so wack he made me key
kid likes the bush... so he campaigned to save the trees ..<----decent opener...not too hard though

im too tired to try, so i'll beat him the fast way ..
you'll make like smokers.. cuz you'll leave in an ash tray...<---ok

a bashed gay, harmless faggot kid - im convinced he is ..
so if you post up something dope, it must be coincidence<---this was funny to me...

cuz whenever you drop, we all know its wack as shit
i'll kill 2 birds with one stone.. & throw his verse back at him<---sorta played out..not really feeling it..

fuck you up good... make this battle a nice mauling
fuck rhythmic hints..you need a whole advice column<---ok closer not to hard though..


rhythmic

You need ta stay hooked on phonics,your bout to be exceeded/
Ima father,you a fetus,I been spittin since before you was semen/<---ok opener sorta played..i have seen it lots of times...

Fuckin bitch, touchin mes a no-no/
You aint even aight, you so-so, couldnt "see me" if I sent you a photo/<--blah....a no no so so shit,boooooo


I could drop 2 bars & be done/
Because your spits is reused like everyone elses, feel like Im watchin re-runs/<--another blah couplet,not feeling it..not flowing well either..

Its apparent shit, but you probably aint aware of it/
My rhymes birthed you, if I died youd be parentless, I could spit this in ancient Arabic/<---ok couplet here,not to bad...

You useless, last-supper ruthless Judas/
I confused this music student like he was a cubic rubix/<---not a good opener as well..

vote feeble on this not really a great verse but some decent hitting shit..well way more direct than rythmic..