neek

This eyeful-neek, is a primal-beast, similar to the one the bible-speaks, every rival-shrieks, when there vitals-bleed!/<--liked this opener flowed well,and nice internal rhyming..

If i ever catch an 'L' expect the night-to-cease, time-to-freeze, and jesus make his return VIbrantly/<--ok at this...

This pompous-star, get stomped-and-harm'd, only carried 'heat' placing his burner in a shopping-cart!/<--sorta funny to me ahh..

I'm truthfully the diligent-sort,killin-of-course,in militant-wars using the tactics of villains-and-force/<--cool...

only powered by my cerebal hemis-phere, every seconds-weird,its like in my mind the holocaust and Heavens-here/<---grrr....blah..

I might-be-arrogant,but you aint dope or slightly-harion, wouldnt get feedback with a 'dear osama' versed viewed by ninety-arabics/<--lol...

my structure-is-awsome,you just suffered-a-loss-son,its either no show or forfeit..someone shoulda read this fucker-his-options/<--cool..


viscosity

u didnt have like any punches on me lol...
so i just keyed this up o'well - without ur lack of punches I win...:

I got you short of credits, like u battled without voting
you couldnt win, if u were the leader of ur own vote-ring!!<--cool opener...

Your below average, like valve's of visa' debits
after posting his & readin my verse.. we see "Neek edits"...<--not feeling this..just didnt get this...

Becuz your worthless punches cant & wont phase-me..
mine as well make a "LoCo Rhymes" nick.. only way
.... the people will think ur flow is crazy!!!<--not feeling this either..could of been better...

Your heart and line rate, droped like u were spittin eighty
he ate his own punches, and threw em up.. and got hit back
^^^^ & yet he still ask's why he spits wack!!<--ok...

Fuck callin this shit punches.. ur puny.. so ill say im on my 11th smack
.... give u a bat.. and still u couldnt hit a home run on me!!<--ok...

Ill brace my self up against the wall.. - only way ur holdin me
ur rhymes got caught between.. and u fell wit em..
now bitch, dont lie.. dont ask - ^^^ that tells u why ur blowin me<--ok...

vote is for neek,i felt he didnt have that many punches but he kept me entertained with his internal rhyme scheme,and multis..i just felt his verse way more..and i felt by reading viscositys verse he didnt try at all..cause of neeks low punch count...should of tried vis..