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Old 01-19-04, 08:07 PM   #14
varentao
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Trust me, you did at the time. Hence me closing it, and deacon now re-opening. Unless i fell into a swamp of mirky, benign, unrelentingly sad disillusion..

...er, i'd go with the former though.


To the piece.

The actual style you wrote it in, hidden, cryptic...played to the overall atmosphere and subject you wrote it to. But maybe that's a logical link anyway. Like, that's the usual way one would go about a piece like this. But your executino is what took it past that.

Oh aye, deep into a personal meaning, a personal feel as such. A kind of relative simplicity it had, made it quite accessible. To read and get into more than get the actual meaning of. Though with a bit of digging, that also comes.

A woman who puts on the facade of being 'tough' and 'cold' and unapproachable. But really yearns to be reached. And this one person does.

Hmmmm, well that's the basic jist of what i got. Though at first i thought it was about a girl being raped. But that passed fairly quickly.

....resp...
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