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Old 01-19-04, 08:35 PM   #11
Zarbon
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c'mon dogg when you battle ... its punches you bring/
o my bad this cat don't know how to swing/<--ok,not hard hitting..

his verse was weak and simply garbage/
but on the other hand my flo is on point like i just darted/<--blah..

so tell me, how does it feel??/
ur telling the truth now...... u do have unknown skillz/<--blah...

so whats ur un told truth?/
dynasty soldiers?...r u sure you belong in that group/<--blah..again not feeling it..

you the weakest out of all the users/
my flo is cold cus i spit like tobacco chewers/<--lmao tobacco chewers that was awful...

man after this shit you'll be scared to carry metal/
i'll put the heat to ya head like you was thinkin of the devil.<--ok,ending not killer..not bad not good...


unknown

This ugly fuckin dude raps like hes confused
Hes a scrappy rappa thats been used and has been abused<--ok,could of came better in this couplet i feel...

Keepin it fresh with all the disses I can get
But you on the other hand is takin notes from a cd cassete<--ok..

This guy acts like hes been a real vet.......
But really truth be told that he hasnt had a win yet..........<--again ok..

Hes throwin out shit that no one wants to hear
Yea hes been around awhile and hes a pioneer.................<--blah..

He asked for a challenge and I volenteer
But he has yet to know that Im a lyrical master mind.......<--wasnt feeling it..

Takin all of ur rhymes and startin to interwind
Ur just a horrible creature that is defined by mankind......<--ok..

My skillz arent Unknown any more,they redefined
Freezin niggaz and burnin niggaz wit pyro....................<--eww..blah..

U still dont understand rap,like movin from the US to Cairo
Do you not understand the language?????
No offense to black people but im wippin u like slavage<--terrible ending...not feeling it..

vote unknown on this one..i felt he came a little more direct,and had a few more punches..neither verse i liked nor did either have good punches..just felt unknown got this..
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