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Old 01-19-04, 08:43 PM   #8
Zarbon
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fro-z

I dont even know how to start a rap on dis kid
He's confident as hell like he just busted my lid<--ok opener not really hitting hard but ,personal ish,i guess..

only thing busted was my nut on ur tounge
I wont hold diss against ya cuz i kno ur still young<--ok..

Ima rip ur ass wider den tha boys with michael jackson
Ur ass on tha line now an thas wat im waxin<--blah jackson lines played already..

Got a question for u, now do I really look black
Im not bitch im white, u must be starin to hard at the hat<--what?..

shit thats even half white ho, wat are u thinkin
dis kid looks at a girl an his dick starts shrinkin<--no....blah..

cuz hes gay with pride aint got shit to hide
took it like a bitch i mean he bent over an cried<--ok..

Ima gonna close this battle like ur mom should her thighs
shouldnt have entered this forum cuz losin is ur prize<--not good..



DNFUO2

Look at this I'm at it again/ this is just another rap battle I'm meant to win.<--ok,not good ,not bad..

fro-z wat is that/I don't know what that means/
but you're picture makes u look like a black charlie sheen/ <--not a good personal here,dont see the resemblence...

you're probably as old as the hills/ i step on your face while spittin' with skillz/ U have no talent/nothin more to provide/you're probably readin this with an unzipped fly/haha made you look/ turn around and see your flow got took/<--not good at all..blah at this..

back to school where you flunk my class/
U'll get an F in rhythm and D in pizzaz.
Your vocab is rotten/ stale as biscuit/ don't try diss me don't even risk it.<--ewww i had to stop reading after this point,not a good verse...

vote fro-z i didnt think he had a good verse..but it wasnt bad,it just was a better battle verse..no really good punches..from either just froz took this..a little advice to the other cat write your verse a little differently it was way to hard to follow..