Fine piece....wasnt really long enough to grab my attention...it was pretty simple but it had good qualities...Nice theme but the flow was sketchy and it lacked any multies, true metaphors...Gotta work on expandin on your piece cause it started gettin good but then it got chopped off...more of a poem...6.5/10

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