It's nice enough. Has a sharpness to it which probably comes with the rigid syllable structure (well, at times rigid anyway)...

...the desperation was there to be grasped by the reader. Though frozen (cold), it was there. Or at least, for me anyway. Maybe it's the way i read certain pieces (erm, like this one..)...

...either way, i liked it. It did what it set out to do, in my opinion. And did it fairly well.

...resp...