New to RB
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IP:
this was decent, not great, I've seen better on here... But I can tell you put something into, though it was vocab lol... but no worries there...
your flow got fucked up a few times, the .. thing don't help lol...
some of the positives were a few good multi's, work on that, u definately need more... and i think i spotted a meta or two...
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