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try to keep your bars the same length, cos the flow was affected here, however you had internals which sorta made up for it to a certain degree.....
Some decent wordplay here, nice Nemo line, and i felt the vocab was pretty good as well, just try to make your rhymes more complex, and shorten your bars mos def...but keep at it, you got potential - use it wisely!
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