Ummm... pretty close battle...
I think both went for the multies style, altho it didn't work well for either..
Both hardly punched the opponent, more self-glorification at times..
Jae.. weaker vocab, slightly more disses aimed, but the words used didn't connect well.. leaving kinda individual punches if you get me.. they shoulda been intertwined constantly rather than jumping from subject to subject in one bar..
Flow/structure was okay I guess tho..
Neek.. this-multie-approach was real wack.. messed the flow up throughout..
Again, not many punches thrown, but they were good enough when they were dropped.. creative..
Basically.. I'd call it even, but really only for the vocab used, slightly better wordplay maybe..
Vote - Neek
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