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pretty decent effort... most was worded nicely, and so flowed ok... but in places it fell, even the syllable count out... but likes been said some decent wordplay n shit... ya scheme was ok, but seemed a bit repetative... try'n flip it round n shit.... but yeah not a bad drop.... maybe it could have been split, with a hook or sumthin, so its easiier on the eye....
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