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Old 01-20-04, 03:05 PM   #12
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both battles were pretty basic and didnt really have any hard punchlines or amazing wordplay in them

double o 7- your verse lacked any real punchlines and your wordplay was really weak lines like this made your verse seem real simplistic "you know, i heard u cant teach an 'oli'dogg' new tricks*
this kids been caughts lickin vicks, for the feel of pussy lips,"

and also advice for the future in your next battle dont say that you think you wil be ko'd.. also you could have used alot better disses and wordplay most of your shit was elementary.. your verse gets a 4/10


k-you had some pretty basic and elementart wordplay also however your personals were ok lines like these were pretty decent "double-0 seven's a agent..so why aint he running with the crew?
oh i no cause they ended thier shit...so i think ill end you."

your verse came at your opponent harder and more directly than double o 7's did thats why i vote k
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