Rhymin like a bitch, jus gona leave you slangin in a ditch
This little fucker is more annoyin than an itch you cant reach
weak opener
By the time you've read this, you'll be ruined and broke
So wrap the keyboard wire around your neck and choke
decent but kinda played
The Grim Reaper calls for u, ur death by my lyrics will be cold
Your jus a cheap immitation, a rip off, jus like white gold
better but it's too much filler
Breakin down this bitch, leave him stuck in a full body cast
Leave you on crutches, left behind and totally surpassed
ehh..not feelin this one
The only way you could raise any funds, is by lifting a till
Now do everyone a favour...
... and O/D on some sleepin pills
pretty good closer....best part of your entire verse, it wasn't bad but you didn't get very personal at all....


In battle you don't meet the limit that you scoff about
whereas i'm instant, like maxwell coffee house ...
funny ass opener...good
I've taken over Front Lines, & I've seen your hated ..
& this is the peon process: i make freeman slaves kid ..
2nd line is good.....
your overrated, why battle when you've known that i kill
losings a steep price to pay..
...now your age aint the only place your over the hill...
another good punch.....
contributin to charity, I decided to help out the lowly beings..
but i thought... might as well send it straight to freeman...
first line good...overall it was okay...too much filler
your promise to whip my ass, it just aint scarin me
cuz your ommiting the truth, like most guarantees...
closer was good just like your opener....

overall:feeble took this battle and ran with it...he had more creative punches and personals and a nice use of wordplay....feeble hit me up on IM when you are ready to start our battle (diversemc) or PM me....

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