Freeman~
"Rhymin like a bitch, jus gona leave you slangin in a ditch
This little fucker is more annoyin than an itch you cant reach"<Dont really understand it> Ok

"The Grim Reaper calls for u, ur death by my lyrics will be cold
Your jus a cheap immitation, a rip off, jus like white gold"<original>

"The only way you could raise any funds, is by lifting a till
Now do everyone a favour...
... and O/D on some sleepin pills"<arite closer>

Feeble~
"In battle you don't meet the limit that you scoff about
whereas i'm instant, like maxwell coffee house ..."<good start I like dat a lot>

"why battle when you've known that i kill
losings a steep price to pay..
...now your age aint the only place your over the hill..."<? ok guess it made sense to u>

"your promise to whip my ass, it just aint scarin me
cuz your ommiting the truth, like most guarantees..."<good closer>

Over all you both had an arite battle, some of the tuff was jus worded weird.... but my vote goes to........ FEEBLE! I like his beginning and closer more, in life the things u remember the most about an experience are the beginning an the end! Good luck to both of u!
Vote--FEEBLE