Fro-z - Your verse was very newbish. There wasent any real clever punches. You had one decent line "Im a newbie u a middle weight I'll still bring u down
Let u hang from my mic cord u'll be tha talk of the town" That was an ok personal. You gotta come alot harder around here. Use some clever metas in ya shit.

- I seen better from you. But the first line was all it took to kill this kid "dude your a FAG LOSER, everything that you spits a WACK SNOOZER
how you claim your a GAT SHOOTER
when your words hold as much intelligence as mentally retarted CRACK USER?
An whats the deal with that dude sayin multies niether had alot.
After that line your shit just fell off tho. But it was about the same as the other dude so thats really all you needed.

OVERALL- got this one just a more creative verse
Return the favor an vote in my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107516
Thanks