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Old 01-20-04, 06:12 PM   #26
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avenges verse
Avenge Know To Open-Spits…
Braid’n His Sisters Hair Was The Last Time Kid Was Holdin Clips
hahaha nice multies and punchline

Shit…This Kid Is More Hyped Up To Fail Then The Olsens Tits
Kid Can’t-Be-Serious, The Mans-Delirious…
If He Had Twins He Still Couldn’t Get A Double-You
nice creative line

You Future’s Relation Is ‘Calculated’ In ‘Mathematic Equations’
Me + Battle – Tele= “Trouble-4-You
I Rattle Ya Rhymes Till Rubble-Is-Spewed…
You Couldn’t Blow Phat Rhymes Exhalin Bubbles Of Food
damn yo that mathmatic equations line had a nigga rolling hot shit

To Put It Simple,Your Screwed…This Kid Is Oblivious, He Don’t Know What To Do
You Fairly Winnin Is Impossible, Less Plausible Than Etheopians Openin-Food
damn nice battle you had some hot punchlines some clever lines and a nice use of multies i give this verse a 8.5/10

telekenetics verse
Location Dope? Where you at im there you must be out 2 lunch
Especially after the one two Taktik gave your ass in the 1 2 punch
Man your 16 an already disabled to skill clumsy bet you fall alot
Speakin of fallin on new years he set wishin HIS balls would drop
nice personal disses with the first 2 lines.. the last punchline was decent too

Call the cops I mangled you in four lines the battles over ring the bell
Ding ding TKO 0 an l your wack as hell an delivered more than mail
This guys mouth is like an ass of a dog no place like home hey toto?
Go there with your dog shit ohh an for gods sake stop eatin that alpo
i wasnt really feeling the last 2 lines of this shit.. plus some of the punchlines here didnt hit that hard

he pure designs of your rhymes are signs of a disease like the clap
But chances of you gettin claps here are Slim Jim you gettin snapped
overall nice verse i give this verse a 7.5/10


overall vote: i got to give my vote to avenge here.. he had more clever lines and i was feeling alot more of his punchlines
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