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..Soft Focus..
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IP:
This was a good battle.
Freeman. I expected better, your opener was very simple and not to complex...for an opener you want something good that hits hard..but your personals lacked...you basically only had punches..were as personals kinda win a battle. but over all basic verse...but good. Could work on personals.
Feeble. You had a more concrete verse. which you put together nicely in a short period of time. your punches hit harder then freeman even though some lines i didnt think rhymed but still were good. nothing much more to say...but i didn't find any personls which was odd i thought you would'a had some.
Over all. Feeble took this. with harder hittin punches. freeman good verse but work on personals cuz i'm sure you could of came up with some.
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