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Good Topical battle
Freeman--you had a great outline of this topic, you described perspectives well and had good vocab and wordplay made me really think...i wrote some what something similer but didn't hit it like that. Good verse i really enjoyed that.
P- Different aproach humerous but i felt it wasnt realilistic,jezus smoken a blunt? kinda odd lol, but unique seemed to have some emotion but nothing to major over all good verse.
But i liked freemans better as it attracted the reader to a more valuable read.
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