Avenge Know To Open-Spits…
Braid’n His Sisters Hair Was The Last Time Kid Was Holdin Clips
Shit…This Kid Is More Hyped Up To Fail Then The Olsens Tits
Kid Can’t-Be-Serious, The Mans-Delirious…
If He Had Twins He Still Couldn’t Get A Double-You
You Future’s Relation Is ‘Calculated’ In ‘Mathematic Equations’
Me + Battle – Tele= “Trouble-4-You
I Rattle Ya Rhymes Till Rubble-Is-Spewed…
You Couldn’t Blow Phat Rhymes Exhalin Bubbles Of Food
To Put It Simple,Your Screwed…This Kid Is Oblivious, He Don’t Know What To Do
You Fairly Winnin Is Impossible, Less Plausible Than Etheopians Openin-Food
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whack structure fix this shit up 7/10
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Location Dope? Where you at im there you must be out 2 lunch
Especially after the one two Taktik gave your ass in the 1 2 punch
Man your 16 an already disabled to skill clumsy bet you fall alot
Speakin of fallin on new years he set wishin HIS balls would drop
Call the cops I mangled you in four lines the battles over ring the bell
Ding ding TKO 0 an l your wack as hell an delivered more than mail
This guys mouth is like an ass of a dog no place like home hey toto?
Go there with your dog shit ohh an for gods sake stop eatin that alpo
The pure designs of your rhymes are signs of a disease like the clap
But chances of you gettin claps here are Slim Jim you gettin snapped
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8/10 better approach werdplay was better nice structure
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vote/telekinetic


drop a favor cuz i took the time u take the time too
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