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Old 01-21-04, 01:33 AM   #28
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Hmm...Aight battle..
Under.. ya bars were alil stretched homie... work on making them alot shorter
You had lots of multies in that shit.. so even tho ya bars was stretched.. they flow'd
Ya punches were original.. had a couple creative personals...Over aight verse

AJ..Lots of played shit... most of ya punches was played concepts(joker/comedian)
You had tha flow and structure... but under canceled those out with his wordplay

so

V/ Under