Personally , .. i didnt like the immagery u used..was kinda erm made., .. like forced immagery .. i wsnt feeling that , .. u flow on the other hand was good, .. & usage of vocab was on point aswell.. hook was catchy , .. nice..but still u got a long way to go.. but u got potential , i enjoyed most parts of it .. only u didnt convince me enough..of this being reality..or being a reflection of it..still not bad.keep dropping, ..
