yea i think this is really good....i really liked this heaps....i liked Your Flow very Much It was very Consistant....i think it had very Nice Vocab and the Discription madde really good imagery....this is the only piece i have read of yous and im impressed i think this had really god structure.....The Story Line was really good to...i nominated it because of most of these things but its the Way u posted it that made it really enjoyable like i havent really read some thing thats been Writen so well....i Really enjoyed it man keep em commin....Consider this Upped....PeacE....