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Old 01-21-04, 03:45 AM   #8
Xpress Lane
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Yea, I doubt anyone would question this. But i'll help you get this over with.

Vote- Das

Slider- I wouldn't call you hopeless, but you're pretty green. Try looking at other battles and study their rhyme scheme and the way they approach punchlines. Please cut all the gangster bullshit and refrain from using anything ever spoken by Ja Rule. In the future, think about what you're writing. Case and point; "JUST IN CASE WE COME FACE TO FACE WE WONT MAKE CONTACT". Oh yea, and don't write in caps, it's just retarded.

Daz- Not going to say much. You spit what you needed to beat him. Generally good flow and your personals worked well. Enjoyable read.

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