Pawn this cat, he's priceless, for all he has is his liscense// I wouldn't 'chew' on you if your flow tasted of 'trident'//
opening was alright.. kind of a weak punch, metaphor was decent
cuz this niggah 'bites' more 'punches' than Mike Tyson// bombz be vioent, wit hollow tip end make ya' eyees widen as you silence//
the follow through was alright, although this whole bar was kinda of played
hear the sirens, the winds, trouble be me throwin' to put end// ta' wits end, sparks the wiks end//
attemped a personal, although it really come across all that hard hitting, it lacked strength as a punch
fuck it, i'll fix it// might 'clean' this niggah up, by why ''Risk' it//
set up seemed like it was a filler the follow through was an alright wordplay...
(the detergent))Who rocks the top put an itchin' senstion like chiken pocks// this niggahs flow is more stank than sweated out sox//
not digging the ending.. nothing really hard hitting

over all you had punchs and metas, but your could work on your flow a little bit, try hitting with harder punchs..


You ain't going no where Bombz.. I took out ya tracking Device
Already Merked You..
Did this Dud Come back for more?Must be Battling a Polterguist
opening is ok.. nice concept with the follow through, your punch was alright
Could be at a Fashion Show.. You still couldn't get Mass Apeal
All ya game brings to tha table is multies.. Just shows you lack Skill
the set up is played... your follow through isnt that bad of a punch
You ain't a threat..
Shit..BombZ walks On a Gosh damn Plane..And tha shit didn't delay
Frontin like u something big.. When u turned out to be a Grenade
eh this line is alright
You get Left go from jets.. but yet.. You still Can't drop shit down
I respect you.. yeah.. of course I do.. Repping a crew full of Clowns!
not a bad punch, tryna go personal
Fuck it.. I'll just take tha plane down.. Before ya bitch ass is released
And by doing that.. I'll make ya loss count Higher.. divisable by three
good ending, the follow through bar was a nice personal shot.

over all you had some iight punchs, good metas flow wasnt the greatest, but it was going.. could had some multis though..

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took it with stronger punchs, better metaphors.. came out a little more directed had the personals



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