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Old 01-21-04, 06:24 AM   #4
code-187
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yeah ur chorus structure was a bit strange but apart from that it was good
"We live to die give a try & live our lives, spit the rhymes bout shit & crime"
(best line)

take a look at my battle an drop a vote. peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195
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