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Old 01-21-04, 12:43 PM   #11
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I'd really like to vote for mike, but I just can't bring myself to it.

Petrafy- you took, just because your first two bars came close to being solid punches. Weak ending. What you had there was good, but in most cases people would except you to have written 2 or 3 more bars.

Mike- You seem to have tried hard, unfortunately you're coming up empty-handed. Try not to reference guys like 50 or Nas , because it doesn't come across very well. Most of your punches were very elementary, like "he backed out cause he pissen his pants" or "sayin you hot but noone even heard of you". Try to go a little deeper and hit him with meaningful punches next time.
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