SplitSoul
Very complex, where it should not be..
You used alot of unnecessary vocabulairy..over did it.
Also when readin' your piece it was really hard to figure out what is was written about..the topic fear hardly reflected of your many big words.
& even though it does not really matter that much..your flow was slightly off at points.
Not a bad piece..far from that.
But i feel you lacked in describing or focussing on the topic.

Sphere
Short but strong..
Nice little piece here.. the vocabulairy was there but not over the top.
Good array of words..followed eachother nicely. made for a good feel.
I feel you kept to the topic better..a better topical.
..SplitSouls was more like a open mic..without a clear topic.
This is also the main reason i'll give you this win.
Good piece & battle by both.

Sphere