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Old 01-21-04, 03:33 PM   #5
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Honestly, no beef but i thought these verses were below par, i dont know how long you guys been rapping but ya need to up your skillz, I thought the second verse was better than the 1st due to complexity and vocab.

maybe try and use a little more imagery, some mets maybe.....

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