it's structure for a audio piece but if your droppin' text, it's best to make it readable...apart from that it was dope,,,got some nice lines in there:

"I'm so sick that I could flow in slow motion, And still keep up with the Jones's/
Rip your residential leave ya homeless, Fuck a wheel of steel I got chrome spits/ " - was just one out of several....

Keep spittin', expand your vocab a bit th0....havn't you been here before, i remember a cat called dark some time ago..might have battled him or something.