View Single Post
Old 01-21-04, 04:34 PM   #27
rule
..Soft Focus..
 
rule's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,639
From: Ont.
IP:

Gay battle.

7- You started okie but fell down. structure and flow normal...but your punches were basic and some not very clear. or just hard to understand quickly. but decent drop

LK-Good verse, you started off okie kept it pretty solid all the way through out.

You both need to use more personals. And be a little more creative. all in all LK got this

7- next time you battle...try and use things from him as a resource to use against him..your lines were played...as were his but they were flipped better.

Keep elaveten man...you got good potential