I agree with penskills and Edicius I have seen better writtens from u and your imagery did seem like it was forced, not that this wasn't a good piece or anything but this type of topic isn't really my thing but as far as your rhyme go's though u had really good flow and structure I thought their could have been more use of vocab though and some more multi's would've made this piece shine but keep up the work man. peace.

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