this was an ok battle
fo real you need to improe on yourstructure, your flow wasn't being felt by me cuz your lines didn't seem like they had an end
but your vocab was good, only if you added it to your punches
c. all you had was punches and disses and i think thats what took this battle
you had a better verse because of the punches and thats how i saw this battle
to C.Quip & fo-real:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108441