::juss words from a boi::
in the beginnin i was really feelin u an followin along nicely but towrds the middle i got kinda lost it seems like it trailed into a more up front subject so gave me a slight unbalanced feelin bout the poem but all in all it was dope i liked it especially the final line i love the way u ended it but like i said i was a lil lost towards the end but wut do i kno? i like it none the less and im sha sumone will see wut im missin...

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...do tell...

Every lil boi is born shi......their ignorance makes them bold......

simply put"...wise words whisperd to deaf ears as no one hears the blurred proverbs that're always spoken clear so i fuckin swear that my where wont be here as time tolls..." second verse of 'Elevate' written by -shi-