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Sounds like this was done on soundrecorder or something? Beat sounds like it's in the background, not mixed down. Sounds like your reading off the paper. Your stayin on beat surprisingly nice for a first audio. "not what we do- but whhere we go" "soilders riskin lives"- word. Vocals are goin back an forth in my headphones. I like the message, dope concept. "world today- to hard to predict", "one day we'll live in peace", doubt it. No too bad for a first attempt. your presence, emotion, a distinct flow-- it'll all come with experience. Keep at it, you got a good foundation to build off. Lookin forward to more....