danksta - wack structure..........flow fell off due to ya structure........vocab was ok........some of the multis were pretty tight.........wordplay could have been better, but still aight........opener sucked........closer was ok.......i was feelin some of ya punches.........no real good personals.......
brethen - pretty good structure........flow was ok........vocab was pretty tight..........i was feelin most of ya multis.......wordplay was pretty ill.........ya opener was nice.......closer was ok..........most of ya punches hit hard........good personals......
conclusion - brethen takes this in wordplay, better opener, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote....
VOTE - BRETHEN
yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108159
much appreciated..........