Atl came with a decent flow. Not much wordplay and punches. Not many multis either. ATL's verse just wasnt an eypopper. Needs some elivation...

Yo had some decent multis, but some were forced. Had some hard punches, some not hard. Decent creativity. It was a cool verse.
Note:the dashes and quotation marks makes it seem like you think your readers are to stupid to motice multis, and wordplay. It's newbish. Your verse would be better withought it...

Overall, Yo got every catagory exept flow and structure, so he gets my vote

v/Yo

pleas vote on the link in my sig...

-W1

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